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Re: Coming out of the closet
Oops, I'm late! Well, I think I've already welcomed you but... Welcome! I can't wait to see what you've written. Hey, I love anime and manga and videogames. What's your ...
Jul 16, 2010 -
Re: The Conscience: Epilog
Hi there! Here's Esther Sylvester for a review. I'm just going to get into the meat of things and review your butt off, okay? 
Charlie Smith continued to run through ...
Jul 15, 2010 -
Re: random!
Hello, James! YWS is a cool place. There are lots of things to do here. This area is for posting short stories that don't have a specific genre, so you ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Flight Of The Griffin
Hi there! So this was a really good poem. There were some parts that felt a little forced and so I'm going to point them out real quick. Clouds left ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Crashing Down - Chapter 2
Hey there! Sorry I took so long. Woah, I liked this chapter a lot more than the first one. It has a lot more emotion in it, and it flows ...
Jul 7, 2010 -
Re: Lonely Road
Hi there! Esther Sylvester is here for her one hundreth review. Huzzah! This was very good! Nice pace and imagery, with an ending that left the reader wanting more. The ...
Jul 5, 2010 -
Re: Trapped
Welcome to YWS! I'm Esther, pleased to meet you! Have you introduced yourself on the welcome board yet? It's under the community tab. Everyone is nice here and will be ...
Jul 5, 2010 -
Re: Heyo!
Woo! A fellow jokester and horrible pick up linerer! High five! (Esther high fives Butterpants!) BUTTERPANTS: Ow! ESTHER: Oh, sorry. I didn't mean to slap your spleen. I am a ...
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever Ch. 9
Thanks. Yeah, I know it isn't quite as good as the other chapters. I'm pretty stuck right now. I'm glad you liked it okay though.
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: Hi :]
Hello there! Pleased to meet you. I am Esther, and this is YWS as you know. It is great here. It is a wonderful place to practice your writing skills. ...
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: Crashing Down - Chapter 1
Hello Wario! I am Esther, pleased to meet you. I shall be reviewing you today! Rejoice or quall with fear, I don't care. :D Good job here, very good job. ...
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever Ch. 9
AUTHOR'S NOTE: This is the ninth chapter for my novel. Yes, it has taken a while again, hasn't it? I'm afraid to say that updates may be slow in the ...
Jul 4, 2010 -
Re: In The Darkness
Hey Pigeon! I, Esther Sylvester, shall be reviewing you today. This was excellent. You captured the feel of being blind almost perfectly. Also, your descriptions are excellent. There were a ...
Jul 1, 2010 -
Re: Nature's Beauty
Hey! These are very nice. I agree with what the others said about them being slightly cliche though. I don't think that matters though if they are well taken, in ...
Jul 1, 2010 -
Re: I'm a Teenage Demigod: CHAPTER 1
Sorry bro, I don't believe you. You have definitely read Percy Jackson books before you wrote this. I knew something was up when you mentioned Poseidon, the father of Percy ...
Jun 29, 2010
